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I wrote this song let me know what you think of it?

24 April 2010 3 Comments
football21 asked:


People talk like were crazy in love,
i can tell by the look on your face,
i wont forget your touch,
just close your eyes,

I met a girl that took my breath away,
i walked to her,
for a while she would say,
look up and you’ll see my eyes,
forget the suns down,
and you’ll realize

baby dont leave my side,
stay for awhile,
ill take you forever inside,

ive been looking for her all along
thats why im writing this song,
sounds like the first day we met,

People talk like were crazy in love,
i can tell by the look on your face,
i wont forget your touch,
just close your eyes,

I met a girl that took my breath away,
i walked to her,
for a while she would say,
look up and you’ll see my eyes,
forget the suns down,
and you’ll realize

woah oh, woah oh,
woah oh,

Forget the past,baby, cant dwell on it forever

woah oh, woah oh,
woah oh,

sounds like the first day we met

it kinda suppose to sound like fear of flying by a rocket to the moon

3 Comments »

  • Robin said:

    I like it, looks pretty good. :)

  • teen-aussie99 said:

    When I read and sang through it, I like it. Really I do, because when I sang this song in my way, it was catchy and it also creates a mood going on in the song. Great job! =D

  • James said:

    looks real nice! i would love to hear it though man.
    but hey what do you think about this song i’m making right now?

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