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Why is life so cruel to me when I am already not upbeat
Why did it take my fathers life
And lie to me about my own backround
Why does there have to be hurt?
Why can’t it be filled with happiness and friendship
Unstead of anxiety and enemies
This is not all the life but a fair amount of it
Why can’t there be free without catches?
Or love and friendship without a price?
Why must you pay for food?
You can’t live without so why not be free?
Why must we work so hard to achieve our goal?
Why do we murder for power?
Why must we all have hate for someone
Why can’t we all feel love?
And why does life have to be unfair?
Why can’t these questions be answered?

Beginning and ending verse are really good. Intermediate verses clearly states a theme but you could try with more passion. Don’t contain yourself! Work with anger, despair or whatever emotion you want to express and create lines filled with unique, personal details, instead of general words for general ideas. Ironically, your poem will get a universal quality that will make easier for readers to care. Thanks for sharing.

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